All Comments on 'The Darkness Beyond Ch. 09'

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RoorniRoorniover 16 years ago

I am loving this story so far. Can't wait to find out how it plays out.

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
I'm on the edge of my seat!

Was the shot through the heart enough to stop Lizanne? Somehow, I think not. Slow her down, maybe. And where is Coran and when will he show up? Again, another great update. This story is fascinating, and I really like hearing Cian's thoughts and confusion about his tender feelings for Hannah. He's still heartless though, taking the life of that man on the bicycle without a second thought. Heartless, yet not completely.

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