All Comments on 'The Darkness Beyond Ch. 11'

A lovely, unusual story, even for non-human. I really liked it. And the ending was right, even though I didn't want them to have to part. (Is this the final chapter?)

I take it she's not a vampire? Why wouldn't Coran come after her? The story seems to have wound down rather than ended.

LOVED IT!!........just wish i wasn't ending

why did you not make them together??????? I hate unhappy endings and as much as beautiful this may seem, to me its bad because the lady and the guy did not end up together >:(

i hope not...i like happy..please don't let it end there.

I really appreciate all your feedback, votes and emails. Thanks so much for taking the time.

This is indeed the end... for now, anyway. You really think they'll be able to stay away from each other forever? ;)

read all 11 chapters in one go. I was surprised at how much I enjoyed it. Well written; you have a good command of the language. Thank you very much. Rad'l

The ending to this story was seriously disconcerting. All of that self-discovery and personal connection only to have them politely part ways? Love does not work like that. Never has, never will, no matter what species.