by Howardw41
usually don't care for long stories, but this one is an exception. Looking forward to next pages.
Am enjoying the story so far and looking forward to more. Didn't like the overdosing of the Viagra, though. No doctor would suggest a patient take four times the recommended maximum dose. Your including it in your writing could well lead to someone (less than astute, perhaps) taking this dose.
That said, keep up the story-telling. I'll be watching for part 2.
That is a very good point. I will look into how I can update the posting. Part 2 has been submitted, hopefuly you'll see it in a few days.
i really enjoyed the first chapter the build up was great. i look forward to many more chapters and cant wait to see what betty has instore for him great build up
Great start to a great story. Am married 30+ years and rooting for your male protagonist to get what he needs.