All Comments on 'The Flap in the Door'

Really hot. Very well done, even more considering English is not your first language. Thanks! Would love a sequel.

racist plot and dialogue, pure mythology about nonexistent BBC and a skanky wife hit by a martian slut ray. Pretty much the usual shit.

Erotic, but sexier if the men were neighborhood teenagers who played with her. But you should have had her immediately get a Plan B so she could entertain visitors safely.

We’ll written - word ch lice and imagery were wel crafted