by Nellskitchen
Excellent story my dear. You certainly have mastered the craft!
And that is how I shall be leaving this earth... perhaps sooner than I thought.
Keep writing.. you were meant to!
When we met I knew you had a very creative spark, but I had no idea it would blossom into this wonderful story. It is your most poetic and beautiful story so far and was a pleasure to read. It was nice to see Heather...
Wonderful story. Such evocative characters. And good sex too. Well done! Flora
I don't usually care for disjointed narrative like this, but you really made it work here. Well done!