All Comments on 'The House Of Robles Ch. 15'

Each of the characters for long running series needs to have a long term dream and with each installment the current lead characters in spotlight should try to realize that vision along with the tryst. You have good dialogue skills and describe the settings well . The dicey house party felt apropriately dangerous and that served to set up a heated taboo liason. But this is not a ' one and done ' story.

Systematicly pairing off the characters like a rote 'to do ' list without keeping in mind the subtext and overarching theme threatens to nullify a substantial part of your obvious skills. Good luck.