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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 9 years ago

And his fiance will be none the wiser of what Jaan did.

CherrypeachCherrypeachabout 9 years ago
I'm begging you... please, please......

Don't stop. Please write more. This story was heart meltingly perfect. Omg. So poignant. So tender. Please, please.........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
confused

Don't know if I missed it in the story, but the first time, why couldn't they be together? Now, is the woman his wife?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Electric!

Pro writing, it's compelling. Can't put it down

One problem. GET AN EDITOR!!!!

The typos are driving me nuts. They seriously detract from the story. It's WERE, not where. Etc etc etc.

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