All Comments on 'The Lucky Guess - Meeting the Crew'

You are inconsistent in your use of pronouns. When quoting characters' conversation you generally used they/them, but when narrating you use he/her for those same characters. Completely off-putting and it strongly influenced the 2-star rating I gave you.

There is no plot, no world building, no character building, nothing. No meat to the story. Just a space pilot that was subjected to hazing on the first day on the job. If that was your goal then my rating should be higher.

Your technical writing skills are very good though. Props for that.