by TxRad
I really liked it except for the fact that there seems to be an inordinate amount of whispering going on. On just this page, they whispered four times and spoke softly at least four times. Then add in all the whispers and spoke softly on the other pages. That's a lot!
Normally I'm not into group but this story is HOT!!!
I love your words "Roll your happy ass over here!" :)
Very well written, Tx!
Keep up the good work!
One of your best, Tx! Couldn't have enjoyed it more, except if I was Robert!