by Five_Eight
Since when does a great story have to be a technical achievement. The balance is there, it is entertaining, the prospect for action and excitement is evident and I can't wait to see where we're going!
The ranks of Major and Colonel are not used in the Royal Air Force!
The equivalent of Major is Squadron Leader, the equivalent of Lt. Col. is Wing Commander and the equivalent of a full Colonel is Group Captain.
Very good read, but unfinished as so many stories are. I was completely sucked in to this story line. Bahumbug!