by Mark2
Loved this story - language was clear and direct and tension built, a sucker for mild coercion fantasies, I found it very arousing. I did feel like it was a bit of a tease, left me wanting more (a good thing). Also fasciniated by the possibilities for gender play opened up by the basic idea. Thank you - am hoping for more? A series perchance?
Great story--creative premise and well written. I only wish there had been more of a satisying resoloution. Well done.
Eliza
This story has sooo much potential to go so many different directions. I am hungry to see what you can think of.