All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 01'

interesting start. Coming of age meets a very strong willed and powerful father. add a new love intrist and what could go wrong. Let me count the way it will go wrong. 5 stars for a novel opening. Looking forward to the future for this young man, and his new life.

It's only BDSM if the submissives are consenting, which these are clearly not.

I always love seeing new universes being made and brought to life on here! Looking forward to continuing this series!!

Interesting concept. Curious to learn more about this bonding process, it seems odd to imagine a scenario where a bonded person can be manipulated physically like a marionette but without an emotional connection?

I was glad that you added the caveat that it has BDSM themes instead of trying to call it BDSM.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Hey. Ignore the anonymous BDSM police and for heaven's sake don't let them discourage you. They can get shrill, rushing around trying to make sure everyone's BDSM fantasies correspond to situations in real life, like that is jack-nor-diddly when it comes to writing a story that turns people on. They don't own the terms and they don't get to say. Do what I do and put BDSM all over your tags, and make sure you get all six elements of the acronym--bondage, discipline, domination and submission, sadism and masochism--since your story is going to contain those elements, as well as all the descriptive terms to really ruffle their feathers. They still peck up every morsel of your writing, arses up, and then squawk-squawk-squawk once they've been satisfied. Thanks for turning me on to your story. I'm going to keep reading. Great start. Cheers. -Harp

good writing. Interesting story. I personally feel like the MCs hate for slavery is a bit forced to attract a broader audience and not what rlly makes sense for the character. But that's not a real issue

Also ignore all comments fro. People posting as anonymous. If they can't even stand up with a fictional name for their opinion they don't deserve to have one

Wow, incredible start, you created a fascinating world already, an appealing cast, despicable villain, and I love that it’s a non-con story but starts out with flirtation and romance, instead of jumping straight into sex. Fix the few grammatical and spelling errors cause it reads like professional writing otherwise.

Great start so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Looking forward to this.

Just a warning Mc turns submissive and this turns into a femdom story.... I unfortunately learned this after 12 chapters. Save yourself

Please ignore the spam from commenters hiding behind an anonymous review.

This isn’t even a spoiler as it isn’t true.

What a way to inspire writers to keep writing.

This story barely dips its toe into femdom anon, so calm down, and to the author, I love this story. Please keep writing. Your worldbuilding is phenomenal, and the sex scenes are hot asf.

GREAT series. Exciting story, turns and twists, really wonderful worldbuilding and characters, plus hot sex! What more can a lit reader ask for? Thank you for all the hard work! Don't let the nitpickers get you down, definitely some people on this site with some baggage.