All Comments on 'The Slow Dance'

by minnie_fae

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MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Great start, please, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh yes

Please more I would love to read this !!!!

minnie_faeminnie_faeover 10 years agoAuthor
:D

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm happy to say that the second chapter is already nearly completed :)

Whispering_ChrisWhispering_Chrisover 10 years ago
More please.

Love it, looking forward to more.

TheTallDarkTruthTheTallDarkTruthover 10 years ago
Intense!

This is gorgeous writing! I absolutely can't wait for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

That was..magical. More please!

elisebeeelisebeeover 10 years ago
Awesome

And flawlessly edited. A pleasure to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
That was absolutely lovely

Please do continue it! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wonderful!

I was pleasantly surprised by this chapter, as these days "slow burn" stories are becoming increasingly rare. Well done, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Brilliant!

This story was an incredibly good read. Slow burn stories are a rarity these days

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
PlEASE CONTINUE !

I keep comig back and rereading the same chapters but I would love new ones (:

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

Incredibly hot. Pictured perfectly the non verbal communication going on between people attracted to each other.

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