All Comments on 'The Swing'

I needed this. Fast sexy,brilliant!!

Keep writing

That was awesome!

wise politely phrased piece.

I could also have done without the 'big cock'

Otherwise it was pretty good

However the subject matter of your previous submission (ANAL) is definitly not my type of story

The writing's good but I couldn't get more than a two dimensional feel for the protags.

Please write more.

You write with great detail, unbelievable. You had me from the get go. I certainly hope you continue to write more and more.

Well done darlin

I liked your story, but when I got past the first couple paragraphs (when she was thinking about her guy) and then that guy came over to her, it seemed like it was some stranger at first, and you didn't know it was her guy until the end of the story.

Well written story. It was a real pleasure to read. Minor typos. I had figured out how it was going to end but loved the ending anyway. Very romantic.