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This is one of the two Twighlight Zone stories I read multiple times, and it remains great with the new edits. Looking forward to the future reposts and the new chapter!

I have to say I really liked the story: interesting insights in the male submissive mind (and his idea of a Domme).

And on a different note, I totally understand the saleswoman pride ^_~

I enjoyed it quite a bit. There were a few typos that slowed me down but - all in all - the story was well done.

So after she degraded him, showed her total lack of respect for him, he divorced her right? And sent Janice to jail for sexual assault along with the idiot wife. Because no one would want to stay married to someone that would treat them like that, man or woman. What a terrible story, even for a fantasy.

Cracks me up that someone says NO MAN would want to stay married to her after that when I was just thinking the first thing I would do was make plans to reafirm my vows!

Definitely a potential 5* story until the introduction of a third party. Non-consensual anal sex is rape.

I wish I had someone who loved me so much that they would want to try any and all of the kinky stuff she and Janice could come up with. The good times they must have had from that night forward we’re so epic and the debauchery escalated so quickly that they became a legend in the kink community and lived happily ever after….and his balls were always drained but only after she was completely satisfied.