All Comments on 'Touched Pt. 01'

I thoroughly enjoyed that, well done. Gaining a daughter-in-law like that could make life interesting and I suspect a lot of fun. One very minor discrepancy, on Page 5 you used Christine's name when it is obvious that you mean Catherine but it did not distract from a good read and a worthy five starts.

i give it a 5

Five pages of tease.

Hopefully, more action in chapter 2.

Um, wow - just, wow!