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by HansHansen

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I would suggest you introduce dialogue and also lower the campy narration. Also, introduce a why to the proceedings and a certain level of credulity which is not provided by the ending.

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Lassen Sie uns doch einmal ueber Bilder nachdenken. Ich z. B. liebe den Anblick eleganter Frauen, speziell solcher mit großen Bruesten. Es ist ein herrliches Vergnuegen, sie streng korsettiert und schlecht behandelt zu sehen. Gerne durchaus voll bekleidet, was denken Sie? Im w...

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