All Comments on 'Trophy Wife'

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sweettalk4usweettalk4uover 5 years ago
Clarity

Clarity parts the haze of anger and desire! Perfectly summed up and perfectly written. A point of view I had never thought of: incest light! The characters seem so natural and real. The sexual tension takes the readers higher and higher with every descriptive phrase until by the end I am on the edge just like poor/lucky jack!

3forbiddenkisses3forbiddenkissesover 5 years ago

I don't usually like this style of writing, but this time, it worked

feliciacosminafeliciacosminaover 5 years ago
Nice!

Very nice story and it is very well told!

PowerFemNYCPowerFemNYCover 5 years ago
Love, love,loved it!

So hot. Hope you make this punk pay dearly.

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