All Comments on 'Twisted'

Very good. I'll have to read more of your work.

That’s was a hot read

Hokey stick? Math's? How many?

@Justplainjeff two. Thanks for spotting. Also, you’re an asshole.

Wow! I know how hockey is spelled. Plus I know that math is never pluralized and I'm the asshole? Must be your superior UK education. NOT!

@Justplainjeff I’m the asshole for making a few editing mistakes? With absolutely no respect, fuck off, you miserable, unkind, unsupportive, unconstructive waste of time.

I loved the conversational tone throughout the story, as it made it feel so real. Thanks for sharing; you're an excellent writer!

One final point. I'm guessing you've never stepped foot in my country, while I spent 3 years in yours. 1966-1969, RAF Welford, Newbury, Berks. In that time I can't even count the number of hateful incidents I incurred, just because of my religion. This condoned by the entire Royal Family! So, when I make the comments you interpret as rantings from an 'asshole', I say it's expert testimony.

I liked it , slowly stroking my hard cock while reading it... no I didn't cum

I liked this - mostly the teacher/schoolgirl aspect, but also how you created a strong beginning with the hockey game. Good work.

@ColinPiper Thank you, very kind. Appreciate it.

@Justplainjeff I've submitted a copy edit to fix various typos. Thanks for bringing some of them to my attention. Please consider not being so rude when commenting on people's work. Just no reason to be. I will retain 'maths' as opposed to 'math', because that's how it's used in the UK, and this submission is very much written in British English. It's not better or worse than American, it's just different.

Another excellent story that seems to leave it open for the next chapter

An excellent read, got me hard quite quickly.

Just wonder if 3 orgasms from the teacher who regained his election without any action might be stretching a point.

Obviously there is a follow up coming along.

Keep up the good work.

a good story well written with the option of a future meeting left open

Well done with lots of man action. Concise and hot. Good job.

Chuck Ayres

Hoping you will write somethibg about their 15 yr twisted reunion

Brilliant well written Next chapter on the catch up after 15 years needed

Very nice - my cock is ready to burst

Exciting but verbotten

oh very very good...A

Awesome work, great pace and immediate impact on the reader!

Excellent dying to hear about the coffee meeting

Made me very excited and hard brilliant story line, looking forward to another chapter