All Comments on 'Val the Vamp Ch. 03'

Really enjoying this super wierd story! Hope you write more soon.

Getting weirder! But I like it. Just wondering if Dorothy has a dog - and hoping to meet a more mature Dorothy myself. I'm qualified - male (check), married (check), beer belly (check - although I drink water almost exclusively and haven't had a beer in many years). C'mon Dorothy! Where are you? Oh! Almost forgot - 5 stars.

Crazy!

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The tone of Chapter 1 was, in part, a travesty of 19th century gothic style. That was fun and amusing. By Chapter 3 the tone has shifted to classic JBEdwards comic irony—which I like even better than the travesty-gothic. The tone is delightful, the characters range from strange to stranger, and the plot is totally screwy. What's not to like? Good work, JB!