All Comments on 'Val the Vamp Ch. 04'

Lucky Leo! Did he thank you? I do. Five stars! And more to follow. ;-)

Jack Lalanne once drank a quart of beef blood each day. He had to stop when he almost choked on clotted blood!

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Curiouser and curiouser! This chapter isn't quite as rollicking-fun as some others, but it's still pretty humorous—especially considering Val almost dies, her One True Love is murdered, and the weather is awfully rainy. The depiction of Leo was great fun, too. (I especially like the passage where Val reads his mind and informs him that her tits—quote unquote—are better than Melissa's.)

I was sorry to lose Stephanie, though. As you know, there's a soft spot in my heart for unrepentant adulteresses. JB, you ARE planning to introduce Dorothy Elston one of these days, aren't you?? Or are you just trying out for the World's Biggest Tease award? ;-)