All Comments on 'Vegas Odyssey: The Club'

by raiderh

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alcopopalcopopabout 9 years ago
If you like this sort of thing... it was well written.

I enjoyed the story despite it being rather far fetched but that is what stories are all about, stories. It's a pity some people on here don't recognise or appreciate that. Good fun and it would be good to develop the story a bit with maybe rejecting a few offers but eventually succumbing to a fabulous venue, maybe with a surprise guest or two.

I will check up any other stories of yours. It may get me back to writing and posting again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Unbelievably sexy

Far fetched? Probably,

Well written? Who cares?

Did it paint images in my mind? Sure did

Did it get me hard? Fuck yeah

Did I cum? YEAH

5/5

KeraliKeraliabout 9 years ago

Really well written and loved the relationship piece. Wish I could find such a club!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
"Total, unselfish love, resulting in unquestioning acts of sacrifice for our partner's pleasure--we were realizing that tonight, and damned if both of us weren't enjoying the hell out of it!"

So what was being sacrificed? Their marriage vows? Nah, their vows obviously mean nothing to them. Their respect? If you respect your wife, why would you let her be used sexually, 3-holed, by strangers, who you cannot control, and who you cannot guarantee have no STD's? (They were friends of the owner; no health inspection required. We are really sorry about that.) Their sexual exclusivity? "Sorry dear, but I've been fucked much better than by you. And I want more."

No, sacrifice is not allowing your spouse to become debased, used, and wanton. Sacrifice is restraining your lust and animal instincts for the sake of your partners self-respect and self-esteem. But hey, this couple has no self-respect or self-esteem. If it feels good, do it. Neither should be surprised that from here on they have given each other license to do whatever feels good, and fully expect their spouse to accept their actions, making that sacrifice for their pleasure.

Hope it works for them. It won't, for long.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 8 years ago
Loved it

I would love to experience this girls for me and guys

phoenix23ninja@gmail.com

Email me if you want to make this happen

By the way i dont check email that often

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