All Comments on 'Virgin Babysitter Becomes My Slut Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A very sexy start, sensual and erotic. More Tags on your writing would be hugely appreciated. For example your other story appears to be DD:LG which is something I find totally non erotic, so I won’t be reading that story. This chapter also also gave details of a previous scene with details of *water-sports* and that’s another kink that doesn’t do anything for me. Obviously there’s nothing wrong with either of those things they’re just not my kink, I’m firmly of the opinion that whatever happens between consenting adults is nobody’ business but theirs.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Anxious to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very hot! Looking forward to their sexy adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Badass. One of the best stories I’ve ever read on here

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh man , it was almost rape but so erotic too

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Premise with potential.

But the sex is just meh. Too abruptly starting. Too automatically proceeding. Too soon ending.

Needs many mire step-by-step details.

He doesn't teach her to use her hands on his cock and balls while she's sucking?

He doesn't have her use her mouth on his balls?

Nothing with her breasts? Her ass?

Three stars.

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