by KiteFlyingElephant
A very sexy start, sensual and erotic. More Tags on your writing would be hugely appreciated. For example your other story appears to be DD:LG which is something I find totally non erotic, so I won’t be reading that story. This chapter also also gave details of a previous scene with details of *water-sports* and that’s another kink that doesn’t do anything for me. Obviously there’s nothing wrong with either of those things they’re just not my kink, I’m firmly of the opinion that whatever happens between consenting adults is nobody’ business but theirs.
Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)
Premise with potential.
But the sex is just meh. Too abruptly starting. Too automatically proceeding. Too soon ending.
Needs many mire step-by-step details.
He doesn't teach her to use her hands on his cock and balls while she's sucking?
He doesn't have her use her mouth on his balls?
Nothing with her breasts? Her ass?
Three stars.