by rawsilk
It's not often you get to read a gay story on Literotica that is this gentle and romantic and sensual. This was a lovely read, a very desirable and erotic scenario. I would like more of the same or a continuation of this romance...
it is an exemple for everyone to use our time in the best way2D25
Alright....sexy. Could have been better if more was written regarding the penetration, the feelings of both.....and most needed the emotions and feelings of both at the time him his cock erupted deep within his lover;; his lover's remarks of at the feel of his final thrust and feeling as his warm cum cold be felt with he spurt, and warm feeling as his ass was filled with his lover's seed.
The story needs some help. The story needs to be developed, motives, the relationship, watch your grammar. As it is, it is too rushed, the passion is artificial.