All Comments on 'Weekend in the Country'

by rawsilk

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FlexibilityFlexibilityover 7 years ago
So romantic!

It's not often you get to read a gay story on Literotica that is this gentle and romantic and sensual. This was a lovely read, a very desirable and erotic scenario. I would like more of the same or a continuation of this romance...

jeansguy48jeansguy48over 7 years ago

This is a wonderful story. I hope this is only the beginning!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Don't mix past and present tenses in the same sentence

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63lsmith63lsmithover 7 years ago
I LIKED IT

looking for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
how to enjoy sex without hurryI

it is an exemple for everyone to use our time in the best way2D25

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Alright....sexy. Could have been better if more was written regarding the penetration, the feelings of both.....and most needed the emotions and feelings of both at the time him his cock erupted deep within his lover;; his lover's remarks of at the feel of his final thrust and feeling as his warm cum cold be felt with he spurt, and warm feeling as his ass was filled with his lover's seed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The story needs some help. The story needs to be developed, motives, the relationship, watch your grammar. As it is, it is too rushed, the passion is artificial.

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