All Comments on 'What a Gift!'

by teohamilton

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A great story, especially a first

This was sexy and fun -- and very well-written. Thank you, welcome, new author, and please have four stars for a good effort.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 9 years ago
Don't look a gift horse in the mouth -

and quickly decide that it is not a race winner! Take it for a ride before passing judgement - might just shock the pants off you, right? !!! Hope you had a good ride.

teohamiltonteohamiltonover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for the votes and the comments. This was a fun story to write. I hope you enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Hot

Four stars! This was a very nice story to read ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very nice.

Very nice. The main character reminds me of my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
o yes I will use my

toy now to orgasm also

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I have been working on my story lines. I am new to the publishing part and could use some feedback. I am looking to see if my stories have enough interest to go forward. I would enjoy meeting a woman that likes my stories and wants to record them in her voice.