All Comments on 'When The Story Comes Alive'

Very good, a little editing and it's a 5 star. I see the story in German, is it your first language?

@onedegreeaway - Thank you. Actually, I'd really struggle if I had to translate the (non-erotic) work I write into German but I read both languages. For me, German just has a nice feel for erotic fiction - German grammar challenges aside - and as this is for fun ... its exiting and fun to write in two languages.