All Comments on 'While the Cat's Away'

Excellent job, thank you for posting.

A delightful tale well told. Hot, sexy, and sweet

A hard 5. Very hard.

I truly enjoyed this story. A very deserving 5. The character development and story line was amazing. There are too many 1 page tales that are rushed to get to the sex. I hope you will continue with this one and create a second chapter. I would be intrigued how you bring mom into the fun.

it was written good, but it was too drawn out

Maybe when Dawn comes home for Christmas break, and her Mom joins the group?

I really enjoyed this tale of a sexy family, who has been for generations. I laughed when Don and his cousin Cindy heard the St. Louis Cardinals losing to the Milwaukee Brewers! That barely ever happens.

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Would be nice if you'd share that fact. Boner softened, rating drops, reader moves on for good.

Liked it until we found out her parents sexually abused her…

Well done & NO cuckolds!

Bill S.

Excellent story... think it would have been better to make a second chapter and worked them into the aunt and uncle scene instead of just having them suddenly accept and want each other over the phone in one short conversation. Then theirs the open item between Kat and the Preachers that never got resolved.

Great story, but it doesn't make sense for Dawn to still be going off to college after just discovering this new relationship with her cousin and brother.