by mypenname3000
Very nice, Like the idea of this one. Found a few minor issues, possible corrections in brackets:
"I don't know why the creator never used[it]. P[I] had done all the work."
"I stood and reached behind me to unzip my dress. I pulled it off, my panties sliding down to my ankles." <- a bit before this he'd already pulled her panties off and threw them to the side. See: "He worked my panties over my feet and tossed them to the side."
""Sure think [thing], Mom!"
""She sucks my dick like calf on the cow's teat. Just going to down [town?] on it,"
Another great start to another great story from you. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
please continue it is getting interesting maybe his sister and maybe his aunt his moms sister and others
Great beginning! Looking forward for more for sure. And I hope the aunt that got hot while listening to all of this has an attractive daughter herself too for her cousin to enjoy! :D
Don't know who you are, but his mom's sister IS his aunt. More chapters please!
Well, nice story for free use. I would like a little bit of remorse from the women after they are used. They feel a little guilty of what they just did however it soon fades. The range thing is a bit far fetched as it should be a short ranged thing as it would seem that the thing would affect the whole country and no one would care if they saw someone being used. Does this guy feel guilty at all say after taking a virgin? Will the virgin feel anything about losing their virginity to a complete stranger afterwards?
I really wanted to read this story since I enjoy Free Use but switching POV back and forth just ruins the mood. Someone PLEASE rewrite this from ONE POV so it can be enjoyable.
Well I guess that truly is free use if everyone is oblivious to it. Although I can see it getting very old very fast and there's a whole lot of chapters. How can there be any sort of drama if no one has any idea how wrong it is and they're all just complacent in the acts like it's the most natural thing in the world? I'll keep reading for now. Hopefully it gets better because if it's just more of this then it's kind of boring. Nothing but interchangeable fuck puppets.