All Comments on 'Your Night Is Mine'

Thank you for this introductory story; I thought it was very wee done indeed, especially as a first offering. It looks as if we have a new star to watch! Speaking of which, please have five of them with my compliments - and please bring us more.

Nicely done and welcome to Lit!

leave him cuffed to the statue.

Hi,

Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story, and that I thought the way your approached the pacing and the structure was really, really good.

Hope to read more soon,

EC.

very nice. really enjoyed it but instead of fingering yourself you could have climbed on his face