All Comments on 'Zoie's Valentine'

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spankingfunforspankingfunforover 12 years ago
Zoie finds love twice on valentine's day!

Jade helped Zoie find herself and let go the past by telling Jared he should have Zoie for themselves! Zoie and Jade are two happy women because they have a good and knowing Master! Zoie should write more about their adventures!! I can hardly wait to play again

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

It totally make me horny! :D Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More!!

Your writing is great!! Please write more stories. :)

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieabout 12 years ago

Very hot scenes, very well written. Five stars!

smfcsmfcabout 12 years ago

awesome, i really enjoyed it.

DDDslutDDDslutabout 12 years ago
BRAVO!!!!! BROAVO!!!!!!

5 stars....I'm going to cum any second. Amazing writing..... amazing plot...amazing finale......BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
that, I have to say

is a bloody good bit of writing. Kudos to you; if you're not writing professionally you should consider it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great series

I really enjoyed this series of stories about the growth and evolution of two subs under the guidance of a skilled and loving Master/Dom. It's given Me a lot to think about and to shoot for in My own training regimen. Although it's been years since the last story, I do hope that at some point more will be forthcoming. I'd be interested in a little more about Zoie's back story. I love what it says about the power of lioe to heal the frightened and broken heart. We all erect those walls sometimes to protect ourselves from being hurt, but they also prevent us from loving and being loved. It would seem Zoie had done that, and has figured out that the locks and keys are on the inside. Perhaps that story could be told as a flashback, as a comparison between what happened then and what she has now. Just a thought, and I loved the whole series, but especially the last three. Congratulations zoiegirl, on finding your true heart.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Wow!

A wonderful story of domination and love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Omg

Geez that was romantic and hot! I couldn't make it to the end without caressing hard on my super wet pussy.

dasgoodshitdasgoodshitover 1 year ago

"Well that could be a problem. You see, I don't allow my girls to wear panties."

best line on lit

SassyThompsonSassyThompsonabout 1 year ago

I love these characters!

This series tugs at my heart along with other obvious places.

Does anyone know if Zoie is published anywhere else? I would happily pay for more about these 3

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