by Thors_Fist
Great chapter!!!
Solid writing and story moving content throughout. Just what this story needed.
Well done!
I really hope you follow through with the set up to take Oliver down this time. He is a evil man and should be punished for his twisted ways. He has pushed too many limits and no husband that supposedly loves his wife is that stupid to miss all the signs of something going on. Oliver wins and gets Brooke, or Brooke holds true and ends Oliver. Anything else is just more of the same, empty threats, and Brooke unable to admit she needs Oliver more than her husband she loves.
Well written story and the ends are all nicely tying together.
Roll on 20
Finally there is hope after all the torture. It would be a better read though if the author knew the difference between possessives and plurals, for the use of apostrophes.