by Usi58
Just when I think all the knots in psychobabble have been untied, here comes another kink--which is somehow very familiar. Good job setting up a wonderful twist which did indeed therapeutically help a marriage.
More please.
MLJ
Oh yeah, abuse and rape is alw@yes a cure for bad marriage. Personally I prefer shoving a poker up his ass, that makes him hard.
That was not very good. The style of writing, the shortness of it not letting the story explore what was happening, all of it made for a thoroughly unenjoyable read. There might be the hint of a good story in there but how this is written and its length it does not come through. Low score.
Interesting style. Ignoring grammar and spelling, it was fun, but not very erotic.