by MixedPickles
One of the Best illustrated stories I’ve read for 2 reasons 1) it had numerous illustrations to view to add
context to the story and 2) It was well written
I have to congratulate you on the excellent quality of the illustrations, First Class! The story was good too. 5 Stars*
Now you are one of my favorite writers. Terrific story line. Pictures capture story intent. Can't wait for next chapters that have friends swapping matesand then the chapters that includes mother-in-law.
Wow, well written with great dialog and very appropriate illustrations.
Can't wait for the next episode...
Well, another super job on the graphics. This time I was disappointed that we did not get to see Sarah and Mia together in Sarah's bedroom. Such a shame not to see two beautiful women love each other. We get to a good point then "bam" the scene is over and we are left to our imaginations what just happened. Love the graphics but the left out scene left me empty.
Well written story.
Your illustration work adds a certain undefinable enhancement to the writing.
How many times do they need to go to the bedroom? Seems there might be anther version of this story.
I like your stories, and the playful, innocent, and dirty talk between the two women, but what is truly outstanding is the mindbogglingly good artwork! Not just the people, with their expressive faces (especially the women are beautifully drawn) but also the detailed attention to the scenes. Part 1 with its scenes in nature were great, and in Part 2, the interiors and the details (such as Sarah's necklaces) are just outstanding. It's almost enough to make me want to learn German, but alas, not enough. I hope you write a Part 2 soon, and in general, more stories in English! 5*, of course.
Loved the story and illustration. Please finish story with Mia, Sarah, Tom and Ian.
Exquisite story and illustrations. I wish I could find someone with your talent to illustrate my stories.
A good story of wonderfully highly sexually charged wives wanting to add spice to their lives with friends. When all agree, it's a great lifestyle.
The dialogue is almost as erotic as actual sex. I loved the way the two women closed the deal and discovered something that enriched their sex lives. 5 stars
I suppose I should read the damn story. Still the illustrations are worth a 5...