All Comments on 'I'll Show You Mine If... Ch. 02'

I surely don't want to become frustrated with little chapters that don't move the story along..Thanks.....Rich

It's a good tale, but I do wish you would move it along.

That was a nice second chapter that you wrote. I'll have to agree with Daddy and hope that you do not stretch this out to wear reading it becomes a bore. I like how you have the sister playing coy with some of her comments and not giving in to her stepbrother. I can hardly wait to see we you do the next chapter with Robbie, Kris and Michelle.

Loved it... can't wait to read the next part...:-D

Drag the story out for many chapters...so hot

hi there,

now don't go hurrying this story up just coz some premature ejaculator can't hold on to his load. less is more and keeps one wanting even more. grin...am hooked...keep writing mate.

That was so moronic of him to show himself after what the two girls had divulged to each other.

Is this going to happen with every member of the squad.

she should have set her's to vibrate and taken it off speaker. That way, Robbie could've told her where he parked his car and where in the den he was hiding. Then she wouldn't keep looking over her shoulder. Trust issues much?

Very, very nice story...and the pace you write at is JUAT RIGHT!! I am looking forward to the next one now...

Rob...hhhmmm...what did he THINK was gonna happen when he grabbed Kris from behind? And for her to have confided all she did to Michelle...he heard it all...

It shows that these siblings REALLY DO care for each other...emotionally, makes the story better!

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