All Comments on 'Kitten's Night'

A strong first piece. The majority of it was sexy and flowed well. You lost me with the numbers. There is the law of deminishing returns and the limits of the nervous system at play here. 30 and 40? Everything down there would have gone off line far before that. You needed a way to get sufficient punishment time. That could have been done with a 2-to-1 or 3-to-1 ratio and still tormented the two naughty cats.

Excellent work! You should definitely write more