All Comments on 'M is for Masturbate'

by Many Feathers

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Taltos1667(a)Taltos1667(a)almost 19 years ago
Excellent

Great, imaginative story!

hexman911hexman911almost 19 years ago
Kept me Reading

Mr. Many Feathers,

Probably the best story I've read hear to date. Great plot, with enough fill to keep it going. Also very erotic, this is one I will share with the wife. Thank you.

Respectfully,

Tom (alas,no feathers)

hongluobohongluoboalmost 19 years ago
Funny, Clever, Erotic and Sweet

need i say more? by far my fav so far in this amazing alphabet series.... think we can syndicate this one on cable tv?? I'm game...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WE NEED MORE STORIES LIKE THIS

Like I said...We need more great stories like this in the masterbation story section

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Keep it cumming

Loved it, kept me wet throughout... Makes me want to ride the bumpercars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
amazing race + masturbation = hotness

Great story. I can just imagine Phil giving out the instructions, and waiting for them at the finish line, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
amazing!

best story ive ever read. write more stories like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Brilliant

The BEST story I have read - perfect! Write more like this one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
spelling

It's a "prostate", not a "prostrate" (which means to lie face down on the floor.

Also, plurals are not apostrophized.

Very vivid imagination, I must say!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Plurals can be with apostrophies

If they are posessive. The mark goes AFTER the S at the end of the word.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I likeeee

Fun to read and cum to :) i really enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

"Wide birth"? Really? I stopped reading there. This author's stories are always suspiciously highly rated given the numerous basic spelling and grammar problems and other issues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Silly People

If the need to criticise spelling and grammar is more important than content then it is such a pity. I doubt that arousal or erotic enjoyment has benefited from distraction. If you need purity of written language maybe Shakespeare is more appropriate for you.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 3 years ago

Creative concept, fun to read and well written

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