by NightTempest
Another beautiful story from a great writer can't wait fornwhat comes next
I forgot a single key press would record that rating, I was thinking that to drag the pointer along the row would record the 5 Stars which it deserves.
I didn't feel that the byplay between Sy and Chris particularly added a lot to the story but the interactions between Finn and Remy were very poignant.
Confession: I'm straight, but I read this as I am intending to read all the Valentine stories and I'm so glad I did. I've never been a homophobe but I wouldn't normally read this 'genre' of literature ... I'm so glad I did ...Thanks.
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I LOVED it. Your stories just keep getting better everytime. Cant wait for more, (but you know that already).
Beautiful story with a strong, solid plot and love throughout. The title fit perfectly to the story. Really, one of your best, I think. Great job, Night!
Out of the park yet again NT!!! Awesome story very well told. :o)
I feel like I just got two charming love stories in one! :) I especially liked Finn and Remy and how sweetly they got together. You have quite a way with nice characters and these two just glow together.
Absolutely Awesome!!
Your writing is wonderful as always and this story was just the icing on the cake :o)
I just loved that story and i promise i will be reading that one again, it was just so beautiful and full of love, i can't wait to read what you write next, please don't stop anytime soon, you made me cry with this story. Thank You So Much.
to wish you were a gay man? I swear.. Night sometimes lol. This was a great story. I loved the characters and the love was beautiful between all. Thank you for the sweet love story, the hot steamy sex scenes between the boys and the lack there of between Jackie and Clarence (because I'm so not into the image of old people getting it on lol)
Great job sweetie, as always.
xoxo
C.
That was quite possibly the best story I have ever read on this site - perfect mix of story, sex, love and humour, and really well developed characters. Excellent job!!
You had to make it your own for me b/c Nomoretears00 had done such a good story about Cupid finding love in this category. As I read on, I did feel like you made it your own. I liked how you concentrated on Remy and Finn first and then brought Chris into it. It was a sweet/sexy story that I enjoyed reading. thanks!
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It takes a talented writer to keep me engrossed and reading through a bloody, violent vampire story ("Cade"). This one is much more to my usual taste, and I enjoyed it very much. You have a real talent for conveying mutual desire between characters. Do you have an editor? There are some glaring spellcheck errors in this story (like "duel" for "dual" and "waist" for "waste"), as well as a few dubious word choices that a good editor could help you catch and fix. I'm completely in love with Remy and Finn, but not so much with Chris and Sy: Sy needs to be better developed to make a credible match for the god of love. I'd like to see you flesh their story out a bit. Love how they wound up buying Finn's grandmother's cottage, though, with Venus as the realtor, no less, great way to tie it up! Please keep writing!!!
This story was absolutely wonderful and had me fully engrossed the entire time. I read this story first then read your other material and now I'm totally hooked. I can't wait for the Dan and rowen story to start!!!!!! You are an amazing writer and should be published!
Gods! I love your writing. I can't believe I'm reading and sniffling over a gay male erotic story (I'm straight) instead of doing my taxes, laughing...too. Thanks. Love your name, btw.
has done much to convince me that many readers of Literotica are appreciative of good writing and not all of them are simply looking for motivation and inspiration for masturbation. Not--as Seinfeld would say--that there's anything wrong with that. Congratulations.!
Thanks. For me being bi I love how this story took first in the contest. The story shows that we want to read about more then just a good fuck. I know I do.
This story was absolutely perfect. It was unique, but completely romantic, and I loved it so much. Job well done. Congratulations!
I loved reading this story and have read your Cade and Rowe and Dan stories too. Can't wait for more and think you have to be one of the best writers on lit. Congrats on the win.
Never skip any good stories....ie..any stories you do
Nope perfect, Anonymous. Just Perfect. I love how you captured the sweetness of love and depth of life's sadness, NightTempest. You utterly captured one of the things that I always tell my kids: For every being that has ever been brought into existance, there is another made to make them whole.
I found my halfside, the keeper of my heart, when I was seventeen. We were married not six months later, are still going strong after almost 19 years, our youngest two kids (twins) being diagnoised as Special Needs, and me suffering through Pancratic Cancer, Radiation, and Chemo when I was 31. Life can be very hard and trying at times, but the amazing thing about it, is that it's always a changing thing. I believe that you captured the emotional essence of that perfectly, which can be a hard thing for a writer to do. In my opinion that just makes you a really really good writer. Please keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from your imigination.
~EnchantedGreen~
i love this story ,but if you could make a story about fin and joel and the cheatin and joel and his new love,that would be great ....
This is a beautiful love story. I enjoyed it very much. You did a lovely job of showcasing the beautiful blending of true love and passionate desire.
I got to page five and realized that there were only two pages to go and was a little sad. I could read about these characters all day. Great story!
I agree with dinkyboots..... Can't get over how beautiful this story is for both couples!!
You are a superb story teller. As a fellow romantic I applaud the way you developed the story and your characters. Happily Ever After can and does happen. Thank you for sharing your gift. Wonderful work,
What Remy and Finn have is beyond words -- truly beautiful, heart-warming love. Remy and Finn develop their love in the cold snow, but the fire warms it, and Remy's beautifully haired chest is also a warming welcome mat for Finn. Glad to have them married a year later, See what great things come from a love between two people. Would love to read more! Would love to find my own Remy!
That was amazing .. I loved that it had more than one love story plus it was very steamy ! ;-]. Couldn't have asked for a better Valentines Day story.
Ive been reading on this site for over 6 years now. And this i have to say is the best one ive read so far. Thank you for giving us romance. Ohh love so much love here. It made me feel completly happy. I really enjoyed it beyond words. Thank you
This was so wonderfully fresh and delightful, loved it!!!
The incorporation of mythology into a romance was brilliant.
Not a fan of Valentine's Day for various reasons, but might revisit
my opinion for 2014...hahahahaha.
This story was Super........Natural and lovely.
Wonderful story,exquitisely written,i love it,you have talent :)
The thought that it would take gods to ensure that people could fall in love is sort of sad... though clearly the thought in this story is more that it would be so for difficult instances...
But, on the other hand, the thought that some people would fall in love and basically stay that way forever due to a god's blessing is a nice thought - none of this three, five, or ten years later and whatever connected them so deep would be gone. A sort of fairy tale Happily Ever After...
Nice story either way... though Remy is SUCH a big baby.... ;)
I just fell in love with his story its one of my top 10 love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
An amazing, feel-good tale, I just had to keep reading and loved every minute. Thank you
This is the sweetest story I’ve read here. I just loved it! The characters were such kind souls and so deserving of love. Also the fantasy was marvelous.
I loved this story so much!! It was so sweet and you could feel the love they have for one another.
This is THE best story I've read! The love and affection is so beautiful❤
Wonderful plot and so much creativity!!
Thank you!! ❤❤❤
This story is the greatest! Fantastic, moving, sweet and lovely. It pulled at my heart strings so many times. How imaginative your writing is. Wonderful. ❤️
I'll sure be back in February to read this ... every year. Amazing story. Thank you NightTempest!
Awesome, sensational,Intense man2man love making and I love the inhibited unbridled love they had for each other.
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I am so loving this story. Thank you. I know these are only stories but it gives me hope that as a mature gay woman I will find love again.