All Comments on 'On The Clearing - A First Time'

by stephan_heute

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very poor

Illiterate use of words

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not brilliant

Poorly written, but somewhat amusing.

63lsmith63lsmithover 6 years ago
SHORT BUT A FAIR READ

THIS STORY NEEDS TO CONTINUE, PLEASE GIVE US ANOTHER LONGER CHAPTER.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Gentle love

Thanks I liked it. Hopefully, the moment was real, and he gets another surprise experience.

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