All Comments on 'Tag You're it'

You write a very mean story Detailed description, plausible storyline evocative and erotic without being sordid. Really new to this category and possessed by a fascinated horror of the taboo. Someone wrote a comment previously that this category is enjoyable as it has more loving. I am inclined to agree. Well done

I only read this one so far but I will be reading the rest. If the rest are like this one you will be one of my favorite authors. Keep up the good work!

Enjoyed this very much and hope you will continue it to expand their exploits. Thanks.

thx again, you are really one of the best story tellers on this site, i have read all your stories and i`m amazed at how you keep it coming and hopefully for a long time to come, thx nathan !!

"'Dumbass, stupid fucking dumbass!' I called myself. I had just shot the best fucking wad of my life, all over my own mother."<p>

I laughed for a solid thirty seconds over that one. That was hilarious.<p>

Loved the story.<p>

One question, though. I thought the rules of the game were that they were to alternate being "it," and that there was only to be one "tag" per day. The reason I ask is towards the end of the story the kid tagged his mom three or four times in a row, all in the same day. She wasn't getting her turns.<p>

No biggie, it was just something that jumped out at me. The only other thing is I would've preferred for the mom to've not used the drunken act, in the first scene where she exposed herself. It's never as sexy if the woman is drunk, or hiding behind pretending to be drunk. It's much sexier, without any crutches.<p>

Nice story!

This is one very hot story, love to see him and his mom become a couple, and her getting knocked up, as it were.

fucking awesome story, this could continue with dares in public places, other people becoming involved, of course its your story to continue or not, nut the ideas are already there. Great piece of writing

One of the hottest stories I have read in a long time! Thanks for the pleasure!

Please continue this story

it was a great read. Don't let it end here..

That was an amazingly good and HOT story! Not corny or raunchy at all, but very well written!

Was great for getting me all hot and bothered too!! Damn!

Please don't let this story die..

continue it please~

Loved this story, it is outstanding. This is too good a story to be left standing as is, so please write at least another chapter to it.

beautifully written

Yes I agree with all those below, you should not let this story end here. Please write another chapter or more soon.

omg i loved it let me know when your posting the sequel.. my email is snakejade23@gmail.com if you dont mind sending me an email soon as you finish writing the next part cant wait to see what they want sharon to do...lol i give this story a straight 5 if the scale went higher then i would rate higher but sadly thats the best i can give i hope you can keep writing.

CAN YOU KEEP THIS ONE GOING. IT'S TOO HOT TO STOP NOW.

Thanks for sharing.

Pthank you, it was Veary nice

Very hot story. Wished there had been a sequel where Daniel fucked Sharon as well.

where's the next chapter to this great story as I want to read him fucking Sharon and hope to also read that Sam forgets about her fertile cunt being unprotected and that Daniel fills them both with his baby batter and gets them both pregnant both at the same fuck session, so here's hoping for the fucking to continue.

One of the best I've read. Thank you!!!

I wish it wasn't a stand alone.

Thanks

What a great atory. I loved how you took your time building toward the crescendo, and then the payoff was even better that I had hoped. Well done!

Great story, thanks

Very hot story.

That was a neat little story. Really enjoyed it!