All Comments on 'The Beach Resort'

Very romantic

This was a good story. Liked the action and I feel like it really could of happened. Just a little insight though. If they had truly been playing all day they should have at least showered before and if he was truly a virgin he would not have been nearly as good with his skills. Still this was a good story and much more believable than most.

Good first story. I can't wait to read more of what you might have.

well done. interesting scene & setup, and leaves the potential for more stories to come. I hope to see more from you

Nice first story. I felt he should be more clumsy, nervous and akward instead of highly skilled during sex.

Still it was an enjoyable read thanks.

Fun, lucky Ethan...I love fit women...about certain they're going to throw a great fuck, and really love redheads...just don't usually find them making a living on the beach

unusual a superfit national sports figure would hit on a guy a couple of inches shorter than her, usually opposite, also if Virginia female that she wrote it from male point-of-view

also unusual that as Mark's wingman wasn't also wasn't pulling all the pooter he could handle too-women usually travel in pairs

syntax, cadence feel like this might be written by author for whom ESL but very fluent

Love more of this. brings back great memories