All Comments on 'Would You Like Cream With Dessert?'

A bit far-fetched at the end with the waiter, but otherwise, I really liked it. I was rather hoping that the waiter would be invited to join the couple after he got off ... work. Ha! I just hope that the dishwasher at the restaurant was a really good one! Talk about complaining to a waiter that one's spoon isn't clean! ha!

Almost guaranteed, a hardon and a grin.....

THank you Buddy,

Dave

I loved it i couldnt stop laughing when Jerry walked up to the table to get his tip and afterwards i bet he couldnt keep his mouth shut the other waiters probably looked for themevery time to get there tip from them you should have put this under Humour and comical.

Pat

he must be a total prick to put up with her....needs to get rid and kick her sorry ass out in to the gutter where she belongs........hope she gives him and others AID's or STI's...all they deserve.....

and well written...

That was one of the sexiest little stories ever. Your dialog and descriptions were very, very well done. Terrific writing. Very believable and doable, with the right couple. Easily a 5. 😊😊😊😊😊

Author wrote.one decent story.out of 500, and this isn't the one.

Would that really happen in a restaurant?? I don't know or care. It was a great fictional short story. Thanks.

Good, but Unbelievable!

NC must have read all 500, even tho he thinks 499 are crap, is he real. It was fantasy i would love to be able to do something similar, sonI really enjoyed it 5*

Well she just made a cuckold out of her husband and now playing him like a fool making him think he's going to get some she probably went and fucked the waiter when she was supposed to be going to the restroom I mean yet another story making the guy to be a pussy with no balls