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Click here"Hip hip. Hooray!"
"Hip hip. Hooray!"
"Thank you, crew," Emily responded, unable to prevent a tear from falling onto her cheek. "I wish all of you every success as well."
"It's time," Collingwood whispered to her as he held out his hand. She gladly took it and let him lead her to the airlock.
The outside hatch opened, and daylight streamed in, causing both of them to shield their eyes.
"Ready for this?" Collingwood asked one more time.
"No, but about as ready as I ever will be," she responded, wiping another tear from her eye.
Moments later she stepped out naked into the light of Earth 2, hand in hand with Collingwood at her side. It was Day 1 of being a naked fuck-toy for years this time. Who would be the first man to give her a command? It was all so deliciously humiliating!
The end. Or is it the beginning?
- COMMENTS
velcrofistabout 1 year agoAuthorThanks VisitorAnon and Clemarth! Your comments encourage me to keep going.
I have a lot of chapters planned with plenty of twists and turns. Can confirm that both male and female chastity will feature at some point, as will more Earth 1 women. ;)
Clemarthabout 1 year agoI love your stories so mutch !!!! I'm glad to read the new chapters of Emilie's adventures!
I just hope there will be a lot of new chapters!!!!!
About the chastity cage I'm waiting for that kind of thing in futur stories......
Very good job!!!!!!!!
VisitorAnonabout 1 year agoExcellent series. So glad you’re back telling more Earth 2 stories. I love Emily’s progression from denial and anger to acceptance and enjoyment of her kink. A sexy fun world with some great NC scenarios. Will there be other Earth 1 women? i
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis feels like one of those cases where "the less you say, the more believable you are". Or to put it very, very harshly, "It is better to keep your mouth closed and let people think you are a fool than to open it and remove all doubt." It's like when you tell a simply, yet believable lie, but then add a bunch of details which make your claim more and more questionable. As another commentator said, you don't have to justify everything. In your case, I think it would have been better to just go "This is how this world works. Roll with it." instead of coming up with that questionable backstory which raised more questions than it answered.
Any time you detail out a prescriptive behavioral norm, you have two options: either it is overwhelmingly accepted, or there is significant opposition. If there is significant opposition (which authors of this site almost never write, disappointingly), then you need to explain how it is suppressed or overcome. If the practices are overwhelmingly accepted, you need to explain why people don't reject it, why people embrace it, and/or why people will take the time and effort to enforce it on others, which are three very different things.
After all, there's a huge difference between tolerating nudity, and mandating nudity. The gap only gets bigger when it comes to sex.
In the early chapters, Emily basically asks one of the girls "Why do all girls find this completely acceptable, with more or less no exceptions?" and the answer is basically "They just do." And if it had been left at that, it would have been fine since the focus of the story is about the proud starship captain being degraded as a masochistic sub. But then the question implicitly resurfaces again once they start trying to explain how the system came to be, and why everyone enforces it. And the question goes unanswered, defaulting to the previous answer "They just do." except this is no longer as satisfactory because the question is no longer a thing in the passing that can be ignored, it's been brought to the main stage and thus, needs be addressed properly.
